How do you feel and what happens to you when you don\'t get enough sleep?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, I feel bad when I didn\'t get enough sleep last night. I think other people also do that. It is inevitable that we sleep and eat food, drink water. If we break this rule, we absolutely become dangerous and agonizing. Specifically, I suffered from drosiness when I didn\'t get enough sleep. It was like being exhausted and lacking energy after a marathon. However, I\'ve maintained my consciousness for one day only twice. Although I was terribly painful, I made it. That is a pity to spend at least 10 hours for sleeping and eating something. I feel that our life is extorted by something. So, I have tried to reduce my sleeping time but it has always failed. Eventually, I acknowledged that it is essential for me to take at least 7 hours of sleep. I heard celebrities sleep 4 hours a day and I really pay my respects to them. I\'m sure it is a cruel torture.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kevin!
Well, I agree with you. Hence, sleep is necessary for every individual even if it\'s a nap. ^^
~T. Maine
>>Of course, I feel bad when I don\'t get enough sleep at night.
I think other people also do that.
>>Correct.
It is inevitable that we sleep and eat food, drink water.
>>It is inevitable that we sleep, eat, and drink.
If we break this rule, we absolutely become dangerous and agonizing.
>>If we break this routine, we absolutely put ourselves in danger and experience some agonizing pain.
Specifically, I suffered from drosiness when I didn\'t get enough sleep.
>>Specifically, I suffered from drowsiness when I didn\'t get enough sleep.
It was like being exhausted and lacking energy after a marathon.
>>I felt too exhausted and lost my energy after a marathon.
However, I\'ve maintained my consciousness for one day only twice.
>>Correct.
Although I was terribly painful, I made it.
>>Although it was terribly painful, I made it.
That is a pity to spend at least 10 hours for sleeping and eating something.
>>That is a pity to spend 10 hours a day sleeping and eating something.
I feel that our life is extorted by something.
>>I felt that my life was extorted by something.
So, I have tried to reduce my sleeping time but it has always failed.
>>So, I have tried to reduce my sleeping hours, but I always fail.
Eventually, I acknowledged that it is essential for me to take at least 7 hours of sleep.
>>Correct.
I heard celebrities sleep 4 hours a day and I really pay my respects to them.
>>Correct.
I\'m sure it is a cruel torture.
>>I\'m sure it\'s cruel torture.
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