How do you feel when you have had a fight with your best friend?

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The most difficult part of our life is to deal with a situation where we have a not good relationship with someone.

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Having a conflict with people makes us feel stressful and lead to affect our daily life in a negative way.

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>> OR: Having a conflict with people makes us feel stressful and affect our daily life in a negative way.

We can overcome general difficulties like challenges in our career by making an effort on our own.

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However, the relationship with the people cannot be improved by our own effort.

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The other person should cooperate to resolve it.

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Especially when we have a conflict with the people who are very close to us such as our friends, family, or colleagues, it is painful to keep seeing them with the relationship stuck in trouble.

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>> OR: It is painful to keep seeing them with the relationship stuck in trouble, especially when we have a conflict with the people who are very close to us such as our friends, family, or colleagues.

When we have a fight with our friends, it often lasts long and keeps irritating us.

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So, experts are saying that we shouldn’t make enemies in our life.

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We often get hurt seriously not by lack of money or failure of our attempts to achieve something, but by people who we trusted but betray and disappoint us.

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Building a healthy relationship is important.

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