How do you feel when you leave your home culture and enter into a completely new culture?

2015-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Staying in a foreign country for a short period of time would be wonderful, although residing permanently is a different story. I am strongly in the mood for going on a trip abroad these days. It’s because I’m a bit tired of doing the same things every day in the same environments. People sometimes need a change. We need to escape from the place where we’re used to living and experience exotic things. I usually feel really good when I travel to other countries, especially when their cultures and landscapes are way different from Korea. I love experiencing new things and seeing new buildings and people who have a different outlook to mine. I have been to a few places such as Egypt, Argentina, Paraguay, Austria, Turkey, etc. where the cultures are completely different from mine and I loved every minute. Trying a different cuisine is one of the great delights of the travel. Leaving my home culture could be annoying and uncomfortable, however, the new cultures can stimulate us.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Sir [이름]!

Wow! I want to visit those countries you\'ve been to.

You are right! We need to escape from the things we normally do sometimes.

Our everyday routine sometimes makes us feel bored.

I hope that you will be able to visit other countries soon. ^^

We can talk more about this topic in class.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina

Staying in a foreign country for a short period of time would be wonderful, although residing permanently is a different story.

>> correct

I am strongly in the mood for going on a trip abroad these days.

>> correct

It’s because I’m a bit tired of doing the same things every day in the same environments.

>> It’s because I’m a bit tired of doing the same things every day in the same environment.

>> OR: It’s because I’m a bit tired of doing the same things every day in the same places.

People sometimes need a change.

>> correct

We need to escape from the place where we’re used to living and experience exotic things.

>> We need to escape from the place where we used to live and experience exotic things.

I usually feel really good when I travel to other countries, especially when their cultures and landscapes are way different from Korea.

>> correct

I love experiencing new things and seeing new buildings and people who have a different outlook to mine.

>> I love experiencing new things, seeing new buildings and people who have a different outlook with mine.

>> OR: I love experiencing new things, seeing new buildings and meeting people who have a different perspective with mine.

I have been to a few places such as Egypt, Argentina, Paraguay, Austria, Turkey, etc. where the cultures are completely different from mine and I loved every minute.

>> correct

Trying a different cuisine is one of the great delights of the travel.

>> Trying a different cuisine is one of the great delights of traveling.

Leaving my home culture could be annoying and uncomfortable, however, the new cultures can stimulate us.

>> correct

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