How do you feel when you\'re able to communicate with an English speaker?

2022-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Elica

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When I talk to someone in English, I feel good. Learning English can help me a lot. such like when you travel abroad, share your culture with foreigners. making friends. However, I often having a difficult time. Because I\'m still not good at speaking I can speak English slowly. It takes a long time to think. For example, why do you think so? When asked me, I only talk about the conclusion. just I like it! That\'s why. My problem is that I can\'t explain. I think I am not good at explaining Korean either. In fact, I think lack of the skills to make sentences. therefore I will try. I want to improve my speaking skills through English classes.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Hailey!
Being able to achieve something through hard work is always so fulfilling. Never give up despite of the difficulties.^^
~Elica~
When I talk to someone in English, I feel good.
>>CORRECT

Learning English can help me a lot. 
>>CORRECT
such like when you travel abroad, share your culture with foreigners. making friends.
>>Such as when I travel abroad, share my culture with foreigners and make friends. 

However, I often having a difficult time.
>>CORRECT
Because I\'m still not good at speaking
>>Because I\'m still not good at speaking. (Don\'t forget your punctuation marks)
I can speak English slowly.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>I speak slowly.
It takes a long time to think.
>>CORRECT

For example, why do you think so? 
>>For example, the questions \"Why do you think so?\"
When asked me, I only talk about the conclusion. just I like it! 
>>When I\'m asked, I only talk about the conclusion.
just I like it! 
>>I just say \"I like it!\"
That\'s why.
>>CORRECT

My problem is that I can\'t explain.
>>CORRECT
I think I am not good at explaining Korean either. 
>>I think I am not good at explaining in Korean either.
In fact, I think lack of the skills to make sentences.
>>In fact, I think I lack the skills in making sentences.
therefore I will try.
>>Therefore, I will keep trying.

I want to improve my speaking skills through English classes.
>>CORRECT

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