How do you feel when you see homeless people?
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you feel when you see homeless people?
I think homeless people are so pitiful.
House give us comfort and stability.
Homeless people are nervous more than house people.
Anxiety is not good fof everything.
They buy a house as soon as possible.
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear [이름]!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about the prompt.
Well yeah, these people are really pitiful. They must be having a real hard time surviving.
So the government must do something to help these people overcome their situations.
Anyway, I provided some corrections. Kindly go over them.
See yah!
~Teacher Shanee
How do you feel when you see homeless people?I think homeless people are so pitiful.
>>Correct!House give us comfort and stability.
>>A house gives us comfort and stability.Homeless people are nervous more than house people.
>>Homeless people are in unsafe situation so they feel nervous more than those who have houses.Anxiety is not good fof everything.
>>Anxiety is not good for people.They buy a house as soon as possible.
>>They must be provided with house as soon as possible.
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