How do you feel when you see homeless people?

2014-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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How do you feel when you see homeless people? I think homeless people are so pitiful. House give us comfort and stability. Homeless people are nervous more than house people. Anxiety is not good fof everything. They buy a house as soon as possible.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름]!   Thanks for sharing your thoughts about the prompt. Well yeah, these people are really pitiful. They must be having a real hard time surviving. So the government must do something to help these people overcome their situations.   Anyway, I provided some corrections. Kindly go over them.   See yah!   ~Teacher Shanee   How do you feel when you see homeless people?I think homeless people are so pitiful. >>Correct!House give us comfort and stability. >>A house gives us comfort and stability.Homeless people are nervous more than house people. >>Homeless people are in unsafe situation so they feel nervous more than those who have houses.Anxiety is not good fof everything. >>Anxiety is not good for people.They buy a house as soon as possible. >>They must be provided with house as soon as possible.

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