How do you feel when you see someone is not following the values you were brought up with?
학생이 쓴 원문
We have to acknowledge that each person is different. Thus, our view toward any issues could be different person by person. People value things, thoughts, ideas, and concepts differently. However, we feel annoyed, irritated, or sometimes stressed out when we see people who don’t agree or follow the values I was brought up with. Let’s say you have a friend who is outgoing, talkative, and extroverted. However, you are a quite person and value being prudent. Then, we will have a conflict and your friendship won’t last long. Birds of a feather flock together. However, strong adherence to one’s value is also a common cause of tension between you and your friends and colleagues who expose opposing values. Values are completely subjective and are personal opinions, not facts. Often people think that what they value is a universally accepted belief and that is factual and objective. If we think and behave in other people's shoes, we can easily understand the difference and accept it.
강사 첨삭
Good Friday to you Sir [이름]. Each person is unique. I agree with you in the saying that, \"Birds with the same feathers flock together\".
I see many people who do have the same interest are together.
They value their friendship as well.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina
We have to acknowledge that each person is different.
>> correct
Thus, our view toward any issues could be different person by person.
>> correct
People value things, thoughts, ideas, and concepts differently.
>> correct
However, we feel annoyed, irritated, or sometimes stressed out when we see people who don’t agree or follow the values I was brought up with.
>> correct
Let’s say you have a friend who is outgoing, talkative, and extroverted.
>> correct
However, you are a quite person and value being prudent.
>> correct
Then, we will have a conflict and your friendship won’t last long.
>> correct
Birds of a feather flock together.
>> Did you mean: Birds of the same feathers flock together.
However, strong adherence to one’s value is also a common cause of tension between you and your friends and colleagues who expose opposing values.
>> correct
Values are completely subjective and are personal opinions, not facts.
>> correct
Often people think that what they value is a universally accepted belief and that is factual and objective.
>> correct
If we think and behave in other people\'s shoes, we can easily understand the difference and accept it.
>> correct
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