How do you feel when you take food supplements? Share your answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I believed taking collagen will be helpful to cure stretchmarks because i gained weight over the years. So, i tried a low molecular fish collagen which is a powder type, but i felt nothing. There’s no effect on my skin, and i realized it’s difficult to remove it once it appears.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Judy!
Congratulations to your perfect grammar here on your homework answer! Unfortunately, you do not feel any good effect from collagen. Hence, there is no better substiture to eating less and also moving more.
Your composition had a very good introduction, a detailed body, and a complete conclusion. Great job!
See you later in class!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Or: I believed taking collagen will be helpful to cure stretchmarks because I gained weight over the years.
So, i tried a low molecular fish collagen which is a powder type, but i felt nothing.
>> Correct!
Or: So, I tried a low molecular fish collagen which is a powder type, but I felt nothing.
There’s no effect on my skin, and i realized it’s difficult to remove it once it appears.
>> Correct!
Or: There’s no effect on my skin, and I realized that it’s difficult to remove it once it appears.ambiance
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