How do you fight stress?
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Writing Task: How do you fight stress? Please explain your answer.
I fight stress by taking shower and sleeping a lot.
>>I fight stress by taking a shower and sleeping a lot.
OR: I take a shower and sleep a lot to fight stress.
It’s good to make a distance from stress.
>>It’s good to make a distance from the stress.
OR: It is good to keep your distance from stress.
I try to not think of stressful things.
>>CORRECT!
I want to forget everything and concentrate on what i’m doing now.
>>I want to forget everything and concentrate on what I’m doing now.
But sometimes there are especial reason why i feel so stressful.
>>But sometimes there is an especial reason why I feel so stressful.
Then escaping from stress is not good solution.
>>Then escaping from stress is not a good solution.
I have to remove the reason.
>>I have to remove that reason.
If there is annoying person, don’t meet him(or her).
>>If there is an annoying person, don\'t him or her.
If there are too many tasks, do it right now.
>>CORRECT!
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