How do you find balance between work and personal life?

2023-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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Making a balance between work and personal lifes is very important in my life. First, I try to avoid working during weekends. Second, in my free time, I usually do something special for me, such as having a time with my friends or go shopping. Working is imortant, my life is more important.

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Thank you for your homework, [이름]!

Your efforts will go a long way!

-Hanna ^^

Making a balance between work and personal lifes is very important in my life.

>>Making a balance between work and personal life is very important in my life.

First, I try to avoid working during weekends.

>>Correct.

Second, in my free time, I usually do something special for me, such as having a time with my friends or go shopping.

>>Second, in my free time, I usually do something special for myself, such as spending time with my friends or going shopping.

Working is imortant, my life is more important.

>>While work is important, my personal life holds even greater significance.

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