How do you get along with other kids your age? Explain.
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Mostly, kids my age are sharp at trends in clothes, games, and cosmetics. Especially Korea.
So I search on the internet sometimes.
But in Australia and America, I can get along if I play games like tag with them.
Kids like those are innocent but... Korean kids learn things way too fast.
And I don\'t think it\'s good because if they know the fun of playing games or doing things on the internet, they won\'t be able to control themselves because they are so young. :-D
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How do you get along with other kids your age? Explain.
Mostly, kids my age are sharp at trends in clothes, games, and cosmetics. Especially Korea.
>>> Mostly, kids on my age are sharp at the new trends of clothes, games, and cosmetics especially in South Korea.
So I search on the internet sometimes.
>>> So sometimes I search on the internet.
But in Australia and America, I can get along if I play games like tag with them.
>>> But in Australia and in America, I can get along if I play games like tag with them.
Kids like those are innocent but... Korean kids learn things way too fast.
>>> Kids like those are innocent but Korean kids just learn things way too fast.
And I don\'t think it\'s good because if they know the fun of playing games or doing things on the internet, they won\'t be able to control themselves because they are so young.
>>> CORRECT
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