How do you get in touch with your goof friends nowadays? Share your answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have five close friends from my high school. One of them lives in the same city to me. So I visit her and spend time in talking with her on summer vacation and on winter vacation. I also call her and ask how\'s everything going with her. For other friends, we didn\'t have a chance to get together nowadays because we live in the different cities and are busy working and taking care of our own family. Probably, we can meet, spend time, and travel aboard together in several years when children are independent from their parents.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
Having close friends are just like family. When you get together, they also bring back your youth and the bond of friendship that you built over the years. Meeting them by connecting and communicating constantly boosts this relationship.
I hope that you can get more opportunities to have time together in spite of your busy schedules. Thank you very much for taking time in composing this essay.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
For other friends, we didn\'t have a chance to get together nowadays because we live in the different cities and are busy working and taking care of our own family.
One of them lives in the same city to me.
>> One of them lives in the same city to me.
So I visit her and spend time in talking with her on summer vacation and on winter vacation.
>> So I visit her and spend time in talking with her on summer vacation and on winter vacation.
I also call her and ask how\'s everything going with her.
>> Correct!
For other friends, we didn\'t have a chance to get together nowadays because we live in the different cities and are busy working and taking care of our own family.
>> Correct!
>> Correct!
Probably, we can meet, spend time, and travel aboard together in several years when children are independent from their parents.
>> Probably, we can meet, spend time, and travel aboard together in several years when the children are independent from their parents.
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