How do you greet your family and friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
In Korea there are many ways to greet someone. When we meet someone new, we say \" 안녕하세요(annyeonghaseyo)\" and bow our head to be polite. We bend our head more when the situation is formal. We nod lightly when when we meet familiar people such as grandparents or parents. If we meet friends, brother or sister, we wave our hands and say \"안녕(annyeong)\". If I want to be friendly to someone, I sometimes hug or highfive with a big smile. I think the way to greet someone mostly depends on the subject whom we greet. If I face someone whom I don\'t like, I avoid his eyes.
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- Teacher Sophia
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>> In Korea, there are many ways to greet someone.
When we meet someone new, we say \" 안녕하세요(annyeonghaseyo)\" and bow our head to be polite.
>> When we meet someone new, we say \" 안녕하세요(annyeonghaseyo),\" and bow our heads to be polite.
We bend our head more when the situation is formal.
>> We bow our heads more when the situation is formal.
We nod lightly when when we meet familiar people such as grandparents or parents.
>> We nod lightly when when we meet a familiar people, such as grandparents or parents.
If we meet friends, brother or sister, we wave our hands and say \"안녕(annyeong)\".
>> Whenever we meet our friends, brothers or sisters, we wave our hands and say \"안녕(annyeong).\"
If I want to be friendly to someone, I sometimes hug or highfive with a big smile.
>> If I want to be friends with someone, I sometimes hug them or give them a high five with a big smile on my face.
I think the way to greet someone mostly depends on the subject whom we greet.
>> I think, the way to greet someone depends on the person who we are trying to greet.
If I face someone whom I don\'t like, I avoid his eyes.
>> If I face someone who I don\'t like, I avoid his or her eyes.
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