How do you handle situations where challenges lead to disagreements with others?

2024-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Chammy

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I\'m the type of try to conversation a lot. I would prefer not to create a situation where my challenge leads to disagreements with others, but if that happens, I try to conversation right away. Ask for a conversation in a situation of disagreement and refer to each other\'s discomfort. In that way, we could have misunderstood each other and figure out what was uncomfortable. If I can adjust or accept what the other person said, I will accept it, and if I can\'t, I think I\'ll argue my position. I hate giving up on someone the most, but I think we\'ll consider a serious situation if we don\'t narrow down our positions until the end.

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Chammy
I\'m the type of try to conversation a lot.
>>I am the type of person who likes to have conversations a lot
I would prefer not to create a situation where my challenge leads to disagreements with others, 
>>Correct
but if that happens, I try to conversation right away.
>> but if that happens, I try to start a conversation right away.
OR
>> But when that happens, I immediately try to strike up a discussion.
Ask for a conversation in a situation of disagreement and refer to each other\'s discomfort.
>>Correct
In that way, we could have misunderstood each other and figure out what was uncomfortable.
>> In that way, we could have misunderstood each other and figured out what was uncomfortable.
If I can adjust or accept what the other person said, I will accept it, and if I can\'t, I think I\'ll argue my position.
I hate giving up on someone the most, but I think we\'ll consider a serious situation if we don\'t narrow down our positions until the end.
>>Correct

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