How do you handle stress?
학생이 쓴 원문
A stress outlet for me would be any physical activities. Focusing on other activities gives me a refreshment, and I could relieve stress. Before the pandemic, I tend to join yoga and dance classes to mingle with others. However, group exercises have become extremely risky due to the pandemic with the high possibility of infection. Now, I try to have walked by myself or with my dog for an hour to spare me time to contemplate various topics and find new motivation. I recently was drawn to mountain climbing, so I go to every mountain per month and enjoy the scenery.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Aciel! Welcome to the club, I have been doing hiking the past months too and it does help release stress for me.
A stress outlet for me would be any physical activities.
>>> correct
Focusing on other activities gives me a refreshment, and I could relieve stress.
>>> Focusing on other activities gives me refreshment, and I could relieve stress.
Before the pandemic, I tend to join yoga and dance classes to mingle with others.
>>> correct
However, group exercises have become extremely risky due to the pandemic with the high possibility of infection.
>>> correct
Now, I try to have walked by myself or with my dog for an hour to spare me time to contemplate various topics and find new motivation.
>>> OR: These days, I try to have a walk by myself or with my dog for an hour to spare me time to contemplate various topics and find new motivation.
I recently was drawn to mountain climbing, so I go to every mountain per month and enjoy the scenery.
>>> correct
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