How do you handle unexpected events at workplace?

2016-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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First of all, I need to figure out what is happening,why it happen Next, if It is need to report to my company, I will make a .call to my head office to let them know our situation and to get a order. after that, I have to make a plan to solve the problem. and I deliver a order to my coworkers and do my best in my position. I heared that I will prepare the position for a three month in Geoje. Durint that time, I do my best to know the process on offshore in Australia and I will keep in my mind that In that situation,I need to have a calm personality and to know the procedure about unexpected events. and I will adapt my position quickly. So I can easily handle unexpected events.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kim!

I admire your attitude and dedication towards your job. I wish you good luck and success at your new job. You can do it! Just be confident always!^^

Always,

~Kelly^^

First of all, I need to figure out what is happening,why it happen

>> First of all, I need to figure out what is happening and why it is happening.
Next, if It is need to report to my company, I will make a .call to my head office to let them know our situation and to get a order.

>> Next, if it is necessary to report to my company, I will call my head office to let them know our situation and ask for assistance from them.
after that, I have to make a plan to solve the problem.

>> After that, I have to make a plan to solve the problem.

and I deliver a order to my coworkers and do my best in my position.
>> I will give my best to perform my duties and inform my co-workers about it.
I heared that I will prepare the position for a three month in Geoje.

>> Did you mean: I heard that I will undergo a training for three months in GEoje.

Durint that time, I do my best to know the process on offshore in Australia and I will keep in my mind that In that situation,

>> During that time, I will do my best to learn the process on offshore in Australia, and I will focus during my training. 

I need to have a calm personality and to know the procedure about unexpected events.

>> I need to have a calm personality and learn ways on how to handle unexpected events.

and I will adapt my position quickly. So I can easily handle unexpected events.

>> I will adapt to my position quickly so I can easily handle unexpected events.

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