How do you imagine your country\'s healthcare ranks compared to other nations?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think our country\'s healthcare ranks is best.
When we go to hospital because of injury or disease, we only need to pay small money.
Also, children under 6 years of age hardly ever pay money in hospital or clinic.
Moreover Korea government is trying to expand the health care benefit for more people and for more diseases.
Sometimes I watched American\'s healthcare situation on TV news program.
I heard they have to pay a lot of money to get medical treatment.
So poor people could not go to hospital to get medical treatment, although they get Corona virus.
Therefore, I am proud of our country\'s healthcare system.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jennifer!
I think everything these days cost a lot of fortune. I am also hoping that our country will do something about our healthcare system.
This would mean a lot to all people who couldn\'t afford get any treatment due to how expensive medical treatments are.
Thank you for sharing!
I think our country\'s healthcare ranks is best.
>>> I think our country\'s healthcare system is the best.
When we go to hospital because of injury or disease, we only need to pay small money.
>>> When we go to the hospital for injury or illness, we only have to pay a small amount of money.
Also, children under 6 years of age hardly ever pay money in hospital or clinic.
>>> Also, children under the age of 6 rarely pay in hospitals or clinics.
Moreover Korea government is trying to expand the health care benefit for more people and for more diseases.
>>> In addition, the South Korean government is trying to expand medical benefits for more people and more diseases.
Sometimes I watched American\'s healthcare situation on TV news program.
>>> Sometimes, I watch the health care situation of Americans on TV news programs.
I heard they have to pay a lot of money to get medical treatment.
>>> CORRECT!
So poor people could not go to hospital to get medical treatment, although they get Corona virus.
>>> So poor people get the coronavirus, but they can\'t go to the hospital and get treated.
Therefore, I am proud of our country\'s healthcare system.
>>> CORRECT!
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