How do you keep in touch with friends or family who live away?
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How do you keep in touch with friends or family who live away?
Usually, I used to my phone contact with my family, friends. Because I contact only nearby me. such as in SNS most of followers not closer people. So, SNS is just checkup surround situation? And I don’t update my situation in the SNS. Thus I keep in touch with my people only text or Kakao talk, and call.
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Usually, I used to my phone contact with my family, friends. Because I contact only nearby me.
>>> Usually, I use my phone to contact with my family and friends because I only contact people nearby me.
such as in SNS most of followers not closer people.
>>> In SNS, mot of followers are not close people.
>>> OR: In SNS, most of the followers are not people we are close with.
So, SNS is just checkup surround situation? And I don’t update my situation in the SNS.
>>> So, is SNS just to check on our surrounding situation? In addition, I don\'t update my situation through SNS.
Thus I keep in touch with my people only text or Kakao talk, and call.
>>> Thus, I keep in touch with my people only through text or Kakao talk, and call.
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