How do you keep in touch with people you don\'t get to see often?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually use Kakaotalk to keep in touch because most Korean use it if they have a smartphone. We can send the message, make and take a call and have a video call with it wherever we are. We don’t need to pay for it additionally and we can use it for free if the internet is available. I think it’s so useful and convenient for everyone to keep in touch. I can’t imagine life without it. I think it\'s so thankful for me in Canada.
However, the older I am, the less I have friends to keep in touch with. Many people seem to think like me. We are too busy living our own lives. I think the reason is too sad. Therefore, I try to focus on my family more and often send messages to my friends on their birthday or new year\'s day not to lose contact with them. Maybe, I think I\'m not the only one and many people will seem to do that.
강사 첨삭
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I usually use Kakaotalk to keep in touch because most Korean use it if they have a smartphone.
I usually use Kakaotalk to keep in touch because most Korean use it if they have a smartphone.
>>> I usually use Kakaotalk to keep in touch because most KOREANS use it if they have a smartphone.
>>> OR: I usually use Kakaotalk to keep in touch because most KOREANS with smartphones use it.
We can send the message, make and take a call and have a video call with it wherever we are.
>>> correct
We don’t need to pay for it additionally and we can use it for free if the internet is available.
>>> OR: We don\'t need to pay for additional fees and we can use it for free if the internet is available.
I think it’s so useful and convenient for everyone to keep in touch.
>>> correct
I can’t imagine life without it.
>>> correct
I think it\'s so thankful for me in Canada.
>>> OR: I think it\'s something for me to be thankful abut living in Canada.
However, the older I am, the less I have friends to keep in touch with.
>>> correct
Many people seem to think like me.
>>> correct
We are too busy living our own lives.
>>> correct
I think the reason is too sad.
>>> correct
Therefore, I try to focus on my family more and often send messages to my friends on their birthday or new year\'s day not to lose contact with them.
>>> correct
Maybe, I think I\'m not the only one and many people will seem to do that.
>>> correct
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