How do you keep in touch with your relatives and friends?

2021-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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1. How do you keep in touch with your relatives and friends? I mainly keep in touch with them by my cellphone. I call them when I need something to meet and ask after each hello. 2. How do long distance relations last? I think long distance relations seems not to last for a long while. Growing distance makes each other`s mind more distant. But if we have truthful love, that it will be lasting under any circumstance constantly.

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Thank you for this Sir Hyuji!

1. How do you keep in touch with your relatives and friends?
I mainly keep in touch with them by my cellphone.
>>> I mainly keep in touch with them through my cellphone.
I call them when I need something to meet and ask after each hello.
>>>  I call them when I need something to meet and ask after we say our greetings.
2. How do long distance relations last?
I think long distance relations seems not to last for a long while.
>>> I think long distance relations seem not to last for a long while.
Growing distance makes each other`s mind more distant.
>>> correct
But if we have truthful love, that it will be lasting under any circumstance constantly.
>>>  But if we have true love, it will last under any circumstance constantly.

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