How do you keep your body clean and healthy?
학생이 쓴 원문
I take a shower and wash hair daily.
I brush my teeth cleanly.
I exercise everyday and when fine dust is no good I wear a mask.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Yale!
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Enjoy the rest of your night! See you tomorrow!
Cheers,
Jean~~
How do you keep your body clean and healthy?
I take a shower and wash hair daily.
>> I take a shower and wash my hair daily.
I brush my teeth cleanly.
>> OR: I brush my teeth well.
I exercise everyday and when fine dust is no good I wear a mask.
>> I exercise every day and when there\'s fine dust, I wear a mask.
>> [ NOTE: The word \"every day\" in the sentence above is two words because this word is used as an adverb, not adjective in which case, it would be one word - \"everyday\". ]
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