How do you keep your things safe during a trip?
학생이 쓴 원문
I bring a sling bag for traveling. I heard that there are too many thieves. I have to need the sling bag.
The bag has important things such as my passport, my cell phone, and some money.
Also, I bring an extra cell phone that I can call my parents for emergencies.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
4. The bag has important things such as my passport, my cell phone, and some money.
5. Also, I bring an extra cell phone that I can call my parents for emergencies.
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Here are some things to consider:
1. I bring a sling bag for traveling.
>>CORRECT!
2. I heard that there are too many thieves.
>>CORRECT!
3. I have to need the sling bag.
>>I need the sling bag.
4. The bag has important things such as my passport, my cell phone, and some money.
>>CORRECT!
5. Also, I bring an extra cell phone that I can call my parents for emergencies.
>>Also, I bring an extra cell phone that I can use to call my parents for emergencies.
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