How do you know if publicity is real or fake? Answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I recheck whether someone’s publicity is reliable or not through a his or her stance. Even though today’s news become more credible than the past, but it still includes false rumors without a verification. Therefore, it should be confirmed from the one who is relavant.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Judy!
Checking the crdibility of a report about a celebrity\'s publicity is tough since we all know that showbusiness is a world that presents the pleasant side of people. Hence, you are right, if the person is credible and honest, at the same time reliable, then we will know the truth.
Below, I deleted some words as well as suggested more appropriate words (diction) to your sentences. Kindly study them well.
See you later then!
-T. Donna~
>> I recheck whether someone’s publicity is reliable or not through his or her stance.
Even though today’s news become more credible than the past, but it still includes false rumors without a verification.
>> Even though today’s news become more credible than the past, it still includes false rumors without verification.
Therefore, it should be confirmed from the one who is relavant.
>> Therefore, it should be confirmed from the one who is (reliable/ truthful).
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