How do you like to celebrate your birthday this year?

Hello Stella!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I want to have a birthday party with my friends.

>> CORRECT!
I want to eat delicious food.

>> CORRECT!

Playing all day long

>> I also want to play all day long.