How do you like to celebrate your birthday this year?

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

My birthday was already passed actually. 

>> My birthday has already passed, actually. 

But next year, I want to spend with my family in the day and the the next day of my birthday I want to hang out with my friends. 

>> But next year, I want to spend it with my family on the day of my birthday and on the the next day, I want to hang out with my friends. 

I\'ll also have good dishes.

>> CORRECT!