How do you loosen up?
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you loosen up?
I usually take some rest and sleep to loosen up. There are another ways how to loosen up reading the books or doing exercise.
How can you divide your time effectively between work and leisure?
I approximately arrange my time schedule in my mind. I consider how to spend time for work or leisure.
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Thank you for this Sir Hyuji.
How do you loosen up?
I usually take some rest and sleep to loosen up.
I usually take some rest and sleep to loosen up.
>>> correct
There are another ways how to loosen up reading the books or doing exercise.
>>> There are other ways how to loosen up like reading the books or doing exercise.
>>> There are other ways how to loosen up like reading the books or doing exercise.
How can you divide your time effectively between work and leisure?
I approximately arrange my time schedule in my mind.
I approximately arrange my time schedule in my mind.
>>> correct
I consider how to spend time for work or leisure.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I consider how to spend my time for work and leisure.
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