How do you maintain a good friendship?

2019-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Recently, I prepare interview for university. In the predicting question there is a quenstion that \'How do you think what is the most important thing in relationship between friends?\'. I thought understanding is the most important thing in relationship. Because when we have any conflicts usually reason of conflicts is that they can\'t understand each other. So at that time I listen to opinion of both of them. And I convey the opinions to each friends attending they are not upset. Then they can solve the problem. Knowing in this case, the way to maintain a good friendship is also understanding each other. When there is something that I can\'t understand about friend I think about the background, why she has to act like this. All of acting has reason. So when I got it I can understand her and we don\'t have to fight . I think this is been adaptable to not only friendship but also other relationship like teacher and student. So how about maintaining a good friendship using my way.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jenna!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Recently, I prepare interview for university. 

>> Recently, I prepared for an interview for the university.

In the predicting question there is a quenstion that \'How do you think what is the most important thing in relationship between friends?\'. 

>> One of the questions there is \" What do you think is the most important thing in relationships between friends?\".

I thought understanding is the most important thing in relationship. 

>> I think understanding is the most important thing in a relationship. 

Because when we have any conflicts usually reason of conflicts is that they can\'t understand each other. 

>> When we have conflicts, usually, the reason of conflicts is that they can\'t understand each other. 

So at that time I listen to opinion of both of them. 

>> So I listened to the opinion of both parties. 

And I convey the opinions to each friends attending they are not upset. 

>> Then I convey each opinion to each friend when they are no longer upset. 

Then they can solve the problem. 

>> CORRECT!

OR

>> Then they can resolve the conflict between them.

Knowing in this case, the way to maintain a good friendship is also understanding each other. 

>> With this in mind, the way to maintain a good friendship is understanding each other. 

When there is something that I can\'t understand about friend I think about the background, why she has to act like this. 

>> When there is something that I can\'t understand about a friend, I look at the background and think why is she acting like this. 

All of acting has reason. 

>> All actions has a reason behind it.

So when I got it I can understand her and we don\'t have to fight . 

>> Once I get the reason behind, I can understand her better and then we don\'t have to fight.

I think this is been adaptable to not only friendship but also other relationship like teacher and student. 

>> I think this is also adaptable, not only in friendships, but also to other relationships like to a teacher and student relationship. 

So how about maintaining a good friendship using my way.

>> CORRECT!

OR

>> So how about we use my way in maintaining a good friendship

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