How do you maintain a good friendship?
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Hello Jenna!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Recently, I prepare interview for university.
>> Recently, I prepared for an interview for the university.
In the predicting question there is a quenstion that \'How do you think what is the most important thing in relationship between friends?\'.
>> One of the questions there is \" What do you think is the most important thing in relationships between friends?\".
I thought understanding is the most important thing in relationship.
>> I think understanding is the most important thing in a relationship.
Because when we have any conflicts usually reason of conflicts is that they can\'t understand each other.
>> When we have conflicts, usually, the reason of conflicts is that they can\'t understand each other.
So at that time I listen to opinion of both of them.
>> So I listened to the opinion of both parties.
And I convey the opinions to each friends attending they are not upset.
>> Then I convey each opinion to each friend when they are no longer upset.
Then they can solve the problem.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> Then they can resolve the conflict between them.
Knowing in this case, the way to maintain a good friendship is also understanding each other.
>> With this in mind, the way to maintain a good friendship is understanding each other.
When there is something that I can\'t understand about friend I think about the background, why she has to act like this.
>> When there is something that I can\'t understand about a friend, I look at the background and think why is she acting like this.
All of acting has reason.
>> All actions has a reason behind it.
So when I got it I can understand her and we don\'t have to fight .
>> Once I get the reason behind, I can understand her better and then we don\'t have to fight.
I think this is been adaptable to not only friendship but also other relationship like teacher and student.
>> I think this is also adaptable, not only in friendships, but also to other relationships like to a teacher and student relationship.
So how about maintaining a good friendship using my way.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> So how about we use my way in maintaining a good friendship
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