How do you maintain a good friendship?

2019-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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the most important thing is we should respect to our thinking and tendencies. I\'ve still lost one of my best friends from our difference of personality. I met him when I was middle school student and then we had made a lot of memories before we stop to keeping in touch. He was a quite good friend but I don\'t want to meet him again actually. we were too different and fought each other a lot of times. Maintain a good friendship is very important but also meet good and respectful friend is more important I think. So, in my opinion, meet a good person(to me) and respect each other is the way how to maintain a good friendship.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jay!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

the most important thing is we should respect to our thinking and tendencies.

>> The most important thing is that we should respect each other\'s opinions and tendencies.
I\'ve still lost one of my best friends from our difference of personality. 

>> I\'ve lost one of my best friends because of our difference in our personalities.

I met him when I was middle school student and then we had made a lot of memories before we stop to keeping in touch. 

>> I met him when I was a middle school student and then we made a lot of memories before we stopped keeping in touch. 

He was a quite good friend but I don\'t want to meet him again actually.

>> He was quite a good friend but I don\'t want to meet him again actually.
we were too different and fought each other a lot of times. 

>> We\'re too different and we fought with each other a lot of times.

Maintain a good friendship is very important but also meet good and respectful friend is more important I think. 

>> Maintaining a good friendship is very important but meeting a good and respectful friend is more important, I think. 

So, in my opinion, meet a good person(to me) and respect each other is the way how to maintain a good friendship.

>> So, in my opinion, meeting a good person and respecting each other is the way to maintain a good friendship.

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