How do you maintain your motivation when you fail?
학생이 쓴 원문
I just fall down during a while, but I stand up in a short. After I cried and depressed, my feeling is better than before. And never give up for everything, thinking positive.
강사 첨삭
Hi Lily! Great job on completing your homework.
I like your answer! Below are some corrections! Keep up the good work! Fighting!
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara
I just fall down during a while, but I stand up in a short.
>>> I just fell down for a while, but I stood up shortly after.
After I cried and depressed, my feeling is better than before.
>>> After I cried and felt depressed, my mood is better than before.
And never give up for everything, thinking positive.
>>> Never give up on everything, always think positively.
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