How do you maintain your privacy at home?

2019-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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I always close my room door and told my family \"please knock my room door\". When I don\'t really want to be interrupted, I lock my room door. But I think i\'t\'s important to be with my family in the living room too.

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I always close my room door and told my family \"please knock my room door\".

>>CORRECT



 When I don\'t really want to be interrupted, I lock my room door.

>>CORRECT


 But I think i\'t\'s important to be with my family in the living room too.

>> But I think it\'s important to be with my family in the living room too. (spelling of  - It\'s)


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