How do you maintain your privacy at home? At school? On the Internet? When using Facebook?
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At home, our family maintain our privacy while closing the each door of rooms.
And I think the privacy of the students at school is keeping well.
On the Internet, I usually don\'t upload the posts about myself.
Lastly, when I use Facebook in the places that isn\'t my computer, I logged out at any cost.
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Hello [이름]! :)
And I think the privacy of the students at school is keeping well.
On the Internet, I usually don\'t upload the posts about myself.
Lastly, when I use Facebook in the places that isn\'t my computer, I logged out at any cost.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
At home, our family maintain our privacy while closing the each door of rooms.
>> At home, our family maintain our privacy by closing the door of each rooms.
And I think the privacy of the students at school is keeping well.
>> And I think they keep the privacy of students at school well.
On the Internet, I usually don\'t upload the posts about myself.
>> On the Internet, I usually don\'t upload posts about myself.
Lastly, when I use Facebook in the places that isn\'t my computer, I logged out at any cost.
>> Lastly, when I use Facebook in places that isn\'t my computer, I logged it out at any cost.
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