How do you maintain your privacy at home? Why, do you think, is it important to have your privacy at
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in my case, whenever I need to maintain my privacy , I write something I need on the paper and attach the door. as a childood, I had to always open my room door, because unexpectable things could happen. but, now I need my time as an adult for studying, having time with friends, or meeting with other people online.
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Hello, Kevin!~
Thank you for sharing your answer to my question. ^^
~t. Ally
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in my case, whenever I need to maintain my privacy , I write something I need on the paper and attach the door. as a childood, I had to always open my room door, because unexpectable things could happen. but, now I need my time as an adult for studying, having time with friends, or meeting with other people online.
>> In my case, whenever I need to maintain my privacy , I write something I need on the paper and attach it to the door. As a child, I always had to keep my bedroom door open because unexpected things could happen. But now, I need my time as an adult for studying, having time with friends, or meeting with other people online.
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