How do you make a good first impression?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, as I am getting older I find out that first impression is quite important to adjust most situations well. So, in order to express myself to others good, I try to keep peaceful face with smile and wear neatly at first.
Donna~
I studied IELTS yesterday and I felt nervous and concerned, so I \'d like to study free talking with you again.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thank you so much for re-enrolling! No problem, free talking/ conversation is absolutely alright. Through it, you can make your word bank of vocabulary and expressions richer ready for IELTS.
Thank you for answering the homework.
See you then tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
>> Well, as I am getting older I find out that first impression is quite important to adjust to most situations well.
Donna~
I studied IELTS yesterday and I felt nervous and concerned, so I \'d like to study free talking with you again.
So, in order to express myself to others good, I try to keep peaceful face with smile and wear neatly at first.
>> So, in order to express myself to others well, I try to keep a peaceful face with a smile and dress up neatly at the first time.
Donna~
I studied IELTS yesterday and I felt nervous and concerned, so I \'d like to study free talking with you again.
>> Correct!
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