How do you make a good first impression during an interview?
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Despite time and effort, I put on the interview, I found out that the first impression is on appearance. People often say never to judge people by their appearance, but I learned from my previous experiences that it occasionally happens during interviews. Having a good appearance does not indicate having a nice appearance. It means that you need to be neat and tidy. Also, your clothing must align with the time, place and occasion. You need to have a shower prior to the interview, and it might sound discriminative, but you can expect more favorable result by having make-up on. Business attire is a must. I found it very awkward for financial service companies to ask candidates to wear suits which are quite expensive. However, I learned that having proper attire ready candidates for the interview and show what they can expect after entering the firms. Since appearance is the first things interviewers encounter, it is important to put effort into it.
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Thank you for this, Aciel!
Despite time and effort, I put on the interview, I found out that the first impression is on appearance.
>>> Despite the time and effort I put into the interview, I found out that the first impression is based on appearance.
People often say never to judge people by their appearance, but I learned from my previous experiences that it occasionally happens during interviews. >>> correct
Having a good appearance does not indicate having a nice appearance.
>>> Having a good appearance does not mean being physically attractive.
It means that you need to be neat and tidy.
>>> correct
Also, your clothing must align with the time, place and occasion.
>>> correct
You need to have a shower prior to the interview, and it might sound discriminative, but you can expect more favorable result by having make-up on.
>>> You need to take a shower prior to the interview, and although it might sound discriminatory, you can expect more favorable results by wearing makeup.
Business attire is a must.
>>> correct
I found it very awkward for financial service companies to ask candidates to wear suits which are quite expensive.
>>> correct
However, I learned that having proper attire ready candidates for the interview and show what they can expect after entering the firms.
>>> However, I learned that having proper attire prepares candidates for the interview and shows what they can expect after entering the firm.
Since appearance is the first things interviewers encounter, it is important to put effort into it.
>>> Since appearance is the first thing interviewers notice, it is important to put effort into it.
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