How do you make a reservation at a hotel?

2020-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Nowadays, we can book a hotel easily through web sites or applications, but there are some points I have to consider before I do. Depending on the purpose of my travel, consideration could be different. If I would want to go to some places because of my work or in order to visit lots of tourist attractions, the most important factor is its location. It should be the nearest hotel from a city centre or a train station. However, these accommodations are usually expensive and full. If I would not have companions, I rather find a little cheaper place though it is less accessible. On the other hand, when I plan to travel to be chilled and enjoy leisure with my family, I would never go out alone due to this reason, a hotel, in itself, is important. Such as room size and interior, the view through the window and the quality of breakfast, I should check every detail of a hotel. In addition, I knew one more thing on last vacation. My parent liked playing in swimming pool, so it is also crucial.

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Teacher ELLY.

How do you make a reservation at a hotel?

Nowadays, we can book a hotel easily through websites or applications, but there are some points I have to consider before I do.

CORRECT!

or>>These days, we can book a hotel room very easily by going to their websites or applications, but there are things I need to consider first.

Depending on the purpose of my travel, consideration could be different.

>>Depending on the purpose of my travel, these considerations could be different.

If I would want to go to some places because of my work or in order to visit lots of tourist attractions, the most important factor is its location.

>>If I want to go to a place because of my work, or in order to visit lots of tourist attractions, the most important factor is its location.

It should be the nearest hotel from a city center or a train station.

CORRECT!

or>>It must be the closest hotel from the downtown area or a train station.

However, these accommodations are usually expensive and full.

CORRECT!

or>>But, these establishments are often full and costly.

If I would not have companions, I rather find a little cheaper place though it is less accessible.

>>If I don’t have companions, I would rather find a little cheaper place, though, it is less accessible.

On the other hand, when I plan to travel to be chilled and enjoy leisure with my family, I would never go out alone due to this reason,

>>On the other hand, when I plan to travel just to chill out and enjoy some leisure time with my family, I would never go alone due to this reason.

a hotel, in itself, is important. Such as room size and interior, the view through the window and the quality of breakfast, I should check every detail of a hotel.

>>The hotel, in itself, is important. Such as the room’s size and its interior, the view through the window and the quality of the breakfast. So, I should check every detail of the hotel.

In addition, I knew one more thing on last vacation.

>>In addition, I learned one new thing on my last vacation.

My parent liked playing in swimming pool, so it is also crucial.

>>My parents enjoy the swimming pool, so it is also crucial.

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