How do you make sure that you don\'t get sick?
학생이 쓴 원문
I repeatedly wash my hands and clean in my room. I believe that if I don\'t want to get sick, I should clean near by me.
And it also needs to have a biorhythm with the routine of my life.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
3. And it also needs to have a biorhythm with the routine of my life.
Thank you for answering my question.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I repeatedly wash my hands and clean in my room.
>>I repeatedly wash my hands and clean my room.
2. I believe that if I don\'t want to get sick, I should clean near by me.
>>I believe that if I don\'t want to get sick, I should clean what\'s near me.
3. And it also needs to have a biorhythm with the routine of my life.
>>It needs to have a biorhythm with my life routine.
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