How do you make sure the food, drinks or supplements you consume are safe?

2018-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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I do not have any ideas when I take food for the meals. There are quite a lot of accident caused by foods. That's why people who are running a restaurant show all information like where it comes from and calories about foods. I have read sad news about baby who died after he took a hamburger. The meat inside burger did not cook right way, so his mother and people guess that he passed away because he was eating a bad food. I think it is a reasonable guess. I know that we need to be careful when we go out for meals and have to check if it is safe. However, I am not a careful person who check how foods are careful. It is because of environment I have been growing up. We have been considering everything are safe and everybody strongly believe each other. We call it safety frigidity .

강사 첨삭

Hello, happy Friday Sir [이름]!

You nailed your explanation. It\'s true when you said that we should be more careful of the food we take. We see to it that we only serve a healthy food for our family. Have a wonderful weekend ahead!

~T. Eunice


I do not have any ideas when I take food for the meals.

>> I do not have any ideas when I take food for the meal.

There are quite a lot of accident caused by foods.

>> There are quite a lot of accidents caused by food.

That\'s why people who are running a restaurant show all information like where it comes from and calories about foods. 

>> That\'s why people who are running a restaurant show all information like where it comes from and how much calories does the meal contain.

I have read sad news about baby who died after he took a hamburger.

>> I have read sad news about baby who died after eating a hamburger.

The meat inside burger did not cook right way, so his mother and people guess that he passed away because he was eating a bad food.

>> The meat inside the burger wasn\'t well-cooked, so his mother and people guess that he passed away because he was eating a bad food.

I think it is a reasonable guess. 

>> I think it was a reasonable guess.

I know that we need to be careful when we go out for meals and have to check if it is safe.
>> Correct! 

However, I am not a careful person who check how foods are careful.

>> However, I am not an oozy person who check food carefully before cooking it.

It is because of environment I have been growing up.
>> It is because of the environment I grew up with. 

We have been considering everything are safe and everybody strongly believe each other. 

>> Correct!

We call it safety frigidity.

>> [Do you mean: We call it trust.]

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