How do you make sure the food, drinks or supplements you consume are safe?
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Hello, happy Friday Sir [이름]!
You nailed your explanation. It\'s true when you said that we should be more careful of the food we take. We see to it that we only serve a healthy food for our family. Have a wonderful weekend ahead!
~T. Eunice
I do not have any ideas when I take food for the meals.
>> I do not have any ideas when I take food for the meal.
There are quite a lot of accident caused by foods.
>> There are quite a lot of accidents caused by food.
That\'s why people who are running a restaurant show all information like where it comes from and calories about foods.
>> That\'s why people who are running a restaurant show all information like where it comes from and how much calories does the meal contain.
I have read sad news about baby who died after he took a hamburger.
>> I have read sad news about baby who died after eating a hamburger.
The meat inside burger did not cook right way, so his mother and people guess that he passed away because he was eating a bad food.
>> The meat inside the burger wasn\'t well-cooked, so his mother and people guess that he passed away because he was eating a bad food.
I think it is a reasonable guess.
>> I think it was a reasonable guess.
I know that we need to be careful when we go out for meals and have to check if it is safe.
>> Correct!
However, I am not a careful person who check how foods are careful.
>> However, I am not an oozy person who check food carefully before cooking it.
It is because of environment I have been growing up.
>> It is because of the environment I grew up with.
We have been considering everything are safe and everybody strongly believe each other.
>> Correct!
We call it safety frigidity.
>> [Do you mean: We call it trust.]
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