How do you make your day exciting?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I feel bored, I usually go on a trip. It is always makes me excited.
Because there are new buildings, new people, and these make me excited.
강사 첨삭
Nice getaway, Emily! I think traveling also makes us feel refreshed. Enjoy more of your future trips!-Faith-
When I feel bored, I usually go on a trip. >> CORRECT
OR When boredome strikes, I usually like to travel.
It is always makes me excited. Because there are new buildings, new people, and these make me excited.
>> It always makes me excited because there are new buildings, new people, and these make me excited.
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