How do you make yourself feel better after rejection?

2019-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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Rejection is one of the most difficult problem to manage. If we don\'t have any way to make us feel better after rejection, we will be depressed. There is an idiom in Korea, failure is mother of success. It means that nobody can success without failure. So, we have to consider rejection as a part of life. I have been rejected from various people such as job interview, dating and so on. I have had hard time when the job interview went wrong. However, I didn\'t give up giving a try for job finding and tried to acquire licenses that are related the job I wanted to get. In regard to the dating, woman can reject, if I ask her go out. But it doesn\'t mean that I am not attractive. She isn\'t just interested in me about my personality, appearance and voice attraction. I have a lot of chances to meet better woman, if I didn\'t be disappointed with such rejection. In conclusion, managing feeling of rejection affect a lot in life, so we have to have at least one way to manage their feeling.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for dropping by, Sir [이름]!

Yes, I couldn\'t agree more. We should do our very best to fight depression out of rejections. This is an explicit answer.

~Teacher Eunice


Rejection is one of the most difficult problem to manage.

>>> correct!

If we don\'t have any way to make us feel better after rejection, we will be depressed.

>>> If we don\'t have other ways to make us feel better after rejection, we will be depressed.

There is an idiom in Korea, failure is mother of success.

>>> There is an idiom in Korea which is,\"failure is the mother of success.\"

It means that nobody can success without failure. So, we have to consider rejection as a part of life. 

>>> It means that nobody can be successful without failures, so we have to consider rejections as a part of life. 

I have been rejected from various people such as job interview, dating and so on. 

>>> I have been rejected by various people in different situations such as job interviews, dating and so on.

I have had hard time when the job interview went wrong.

>>> I had a hard time coping from job interviews that went wrong.  

However, I didn\'t give up giving a try for job finding and tried to acquire licenses that are related the job I wanted to get.

>>> However, I didn\'t give up giving a try to find a job, and tried to acquire licenses that are related to the job that I wanted to get.

In regard to the dating, woman can reject, if I ask her go out. But it doesn\'t mean that I am not attractive.

>>> In regards to dating, women can reject if I ask her out, but it doesn\'t mean that I am not attractive.  

She isn\'t just interested in me about my personality, appearance and voice attraction.

>>> She isn\'t interested in me because of my personality, appearance and voice.  

I have a lot of chances to meet better woman, if I didn\'t be disappointed with such rejection.

>>> I have a lot of chances to meet a better woman, so I didn\'t get disappointed with such rejections.

In conclusion, managing feeling of rejection affect a lot in life, so we have to have at least one way to manage their feeling.

>>> In conclusion, managing our feelings out of rejections affect us a lot in life, so we have to have at least one way to cope with it. 

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