How do you make yourself feel better after rejection?
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Yes, I couldn\'t agree more. We should do our very best to fight depression out of rejections. This is an explicit answer.
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Rejection is one of the most difficult problem to manage.
>>> correct!
If we don\'t have any way to make us feel better after rejection, we will be depressed.
>>> If we don\'t have other ways to make us feel better after rejection, we will be depressed.
There is an idiom in Korea, failure is mother of success.
>>> There is an idiom in Korea which is,\"failure is the mother of success.\"
It means that nobody can success without failure. So, we have to consider rejection as a part of life.
>>> It means that nobody can be successful without failures, so we have to consider rejections as a part of life.
I have been rejected from various people such as job interview, dating and so on.
>>> I have been rejected by various people in different situations such as job interviews, dating and so on.
I have had hard time when the job interview went wrong.
>>> I had a hard time coping from job interviews that went wrong.
However, I didn\'t give up giving a try for job finding and tried to acquire licenses that are related the job I wanted to get.
>>> However, I didn\'t give up giving a try to find a job, and tried to acquire licenses that are related to the job that I wanted to get.
In regard to the dating, woman can reject, if I ask her go out. But it doesn\'t mean that I am not attractive.
>>> In regards to dating, women can reject if I ask her out, but it doesn\'t mean that I am not attractive.
She isn\'t just interested in me about my personality, appearance and voice attraction.
>>> She isn\'t interested in me because of my personality, appearance and voice.
I have a lot of chances to meet better woman, if I didn\'t be disappointed with such rejection.
>>> I have a lot of chances to meet a better woman, so I didn\'t get disappointed with such rejections.
In conclusion, managing feeling of rejection affect a lot in life, so we have to have at least one way to manage their feeling.
>>> In conclusion, managing our feelings out of rejections affect us a lot in life, so we have to have at least one way to cope with it.
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