How do you measure your improvement in a specific field?
학생이 쓴 원문
How I measure how much I have improved in a particular field is defferant depending on which field it is.
I\'ll talk about how I measure my improvement in the violin performance I\'m interested in now.
There are 2 ways to think that my performance has improved in violin performance.
The first is sound and the second is speed.
When I play the violin at first, I don\'t get a good sound, and I touch the 2 strings together, so I get a sound that\'s not clean.
I can see that the pitch is also unstable, so I can\'t press the exact position with my left finger.
When connecting the first and next passage, I can’t move my left fingers quickly.
However, if I practice hard, I can see that my left finger moves accurately and quickly on the fingerboard.
If I practice a little more, my fingers will move exactly even if I wouldn’t see the movement of my fingers with my eyes.
And if I compare the previous videos with the current videos, I can see the process of developing myself.
강사 첨삭
Hi David! I just finished reading your homework response, and I really appreciate how well you explained your process of measuring improvement in violin performance. Your breakdown of sound and speed as key indicators was insightful. I also liked how you described the difference between your early attempts and your current progress, especially the part about finger movement accuracy. Your explanation was clear and well-structured. Great job!
~ T. Lia
How I measure how much I have improved in a particular field is defferant depending on which field it is.
>> How I measure how much I have improved in a particular field is different depending on which field it is.
I\'ll talk about how I measure my improvement in the violin performance I\'m interested in now.
>> I\'ll talk about how I measure my improvement in violin performance, which I\'m currently interested in.
There are 2 ways to think that my performance has improved in violin performance.
>> There are two ways to determine if my violin performance has improved.
The first is sound and the second is speed.
>> CORRECT
When I play the violin at first, I don\'t get a good sound, and I touch the 2 strings together, so I get a sound that\'s not clean.
>> When I first play the violin, I don’t get a good sound and often touch two strings together, resulting in an unclear sound.
I can see that the pitch is also unstable, so I can\'t press the exact position with my left finger.
>> CORRECT
When connecting the first and next passage, I can’t move my left fingers quickly.
>> When connecting the first passage to the next, I can’t move my left fingers quickly.
However, if I practice hard, I can see that my left finger moves accurately and quickly on the fingerboard.
>> However, with consistent practice, I can see that my left finger moves accurately and quickly on the fingerboard.
If I practice a little more, my fingers will move exactly even if I wouldn’t see the movement of my fingers with my eyes.
>> If I practice a little more, my fingers will move accurately even if I don’t watch their movement with my eyes.
And if I compare the previous videos with the current videos, I can see the process of developing myself.
>> And if I compare previous videos with current ones, I can see my progress.
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