How do you motivate yourself when you feel tired of everything?

2023-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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When I feel tired of everything, I try to see what my priority is in my life again. The best thing is to stop my all tasks to take some rest. But I can\'t do that in reality. In the same way, I have to discover the value of time in this time with struggling. I often ask myself what have to do, what I can do, and also, how the growth. It\'s hard to move on to the next step healthier without these questions. Also, I need to be brave to decide my life in another way. It is followed by other stress and struggle. But if I want to challenge some things in my life, I have to effort by myself. Especially, I usually write the emotions of my routine. Because I want to know the location of my emotions. If I don\'t know and see my emotions, It\'s hard to catch up on things that relate to mine. I have to see the relationship between the original family together. I\'m learning this process through studying counseling. I always try to encourage and listen to myself. When I know myself, I can be happy. :)

강사 첨삭

I didn\'t know you are this detailed, Jane! I can also see the advantage of evaluating your emotions, so as to grow and prevent any unfavorable emotional state. See you!-Faith-
When I feel tired of everything, I try to see what my priority is in my life again. 
>> CORRECT
OR When I feel tired of everything, I try to revisit my priorities in life. 
The best thing is to stop my all tasks to take some rest. 
>> The best thing is to stop all of my tasks to take some rest. 
But I can\'t do that in reality.
>> However, I cannot do that in reality. 
In the same way, I have to discover the value of time in this time with struggling. 
>> In the same way, I have to discover the value of time in this tough time. 
I often ask myself what have to do, what I can do, and also, how the growth. 
>> I often ask myself what I have to do, what I can do, and how to grow. 
It\'s hard to move on to the next step healthier without these questions. 
>> CORRECT
Also, I need to be brave to decide my life in another way. 
>> CORRECT
It is followed by other stress and struggle. 
>> CORRECT
But if I want to challenge some things in my life, I have to effort by myself. 
>> Nevertheless, if I want to challenge some things in my life, I have to make an effort by myself. 
Especially, I usually write the emotions of my routine. Because I want to know the location of my emotions.
>> Especially, I usually write my emotions about my routine because I want to know its status.
If I don\'t know and see my emotions, It\'s hard to catch up on things that relate to mine. 
>> If I do not know and see my emotions, it is hard to catch up on things that are related to me. 
I have to see the relationship between the original family together. 
>> I have to see the relationship among my family members together. 
I\'m learning this process through studying counseling. 
>> CORRECT
OR I am learning this process through studying counseling. 
I always try to encourage and listen to myself. 
>> CORRECT
When I know myself, I can be happy. :)
>> CORRECT

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