How do you overcome stress at work?
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Frankly speaking, I think overcoming stress at work is impossible.
Because there always has occur new problem and has many people.
So after work or on weekend have to rest very well.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Emily! I must agree with you! I really hope you enjoy your weekend. See you!-Faith-
Frankly speaking, I think overcoming stress at work is impossible.>> CORRECT
Because there always has occur new problem and has many people.
>> It\'s because there are always new problems and many people.
So after work or on weekend have to rest very well.
>> It\'s because there are always new problems and many people.
So after work or on weekend have to rest very well.
>> So, after work or on weekends, I have to rest very well.
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