How do you plan on preparing for the match?
학생이 쓴 원문
Looking back at my game last season, there were a lot of mistakes in driver swings.
These days, I\'m practicing my driver shot a lot so that I don\'t make mistakes in my driver swing.
I\'ve seen a lot of cases which if I made a mistake in the first shot, my mind have collapsed after that.
I had to have a good driver shot to play a fun game.
Above all, it is most important for me to have confidence in my swing.
강사 첨삭
Hi David. You did a great job expressing your thoughts about improving your driver swing! I made a few grammar and clarity adjustments to make your sentences smoother. Keep up the practice and stay confident in your game.
~ T. Lia
Looking back at my game last season, there were a lot of mistakes in driver swings.
>> Looking back at my game last season, I made a lot of mistakes in my driver swings.
These days, I\'m practicing my driver shot a lot so that I don\'t make mistakes in my driver swing.
>> These days, I’m practicing my driver shot a lot to avoid making mistakes in my swing.
I\'ve seen a lot of cases which if I made a mistake in the first shot, my mind have collapsed after that.
>> I’ve noticed that when I make a mistake on my first shot, my mindset often collapses afterward.
I had to have a good driver shot to play a fun game.
>> I need to have a good driver shot to enjoy the game.
Above all, it is most important for me to have confidence in my swing.
>> Above all, having confidence in my swing is the most important thing for me.
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