How do you plan to achieve that goal?
학생이 쓴 원문
For the shot term goal(finish the residency), I don\'t have any plan. I just have to empty ma mind and endure. But for the long term goal, I have some plans. First, I want three babies. Second, I want to go backpacking with my husband like we did in university school students. I think, maybe we can realize this about 40s. We have to make the money for this. Third, I will continue my job for at least 20 years. I hope to know what it feels like to keep going my job for 20 years.
강사 첨삭
Hello Saki-San! :)
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
For the shot term goal(finish the residency), I don\'t have any plan.
>> For my short term goals, aside from accomplishing my residency here in Japan, I don\'t have any further plans.
I just have to empty ma mind and endure.
>> I just have to relax my mind and endure everything.
But for the long term goal, I have some plans.
>> But for my long term goals, I have some plans.
First, I want three babies.
>> First, I want to have three babies.
Second, I want to go backpacking with my husband like we did in university school students.
>> Second, I want to go backpacking with my husband like what we used to do during our university days.
I think, maybe we can realize this about 40s.
>> I think, maybe we will be able to realize this when we are already 40\'s.
We have to make the money for this.
>> We have to save money for this first.
Third, I will continue my job for at least 20 years.
>> Third, I will continue doing my job for at least 20 more years.
I hope to know what it feels like to keep going my job for 20 years.
>> I would like to know what it feels like to keep going doing my job for 20 more years.
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