How do you plan to motivate yourself to improve your English?
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I want to talk foreigner with English when i go travel anywhere. you know, if you can talk English very well, you can talk to almost of people in the world. so after the covid 19 is resolved, I want to talk foreigner confidently when I go travel. that\'s why I study english.
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I want to talk foreigner with English when i go travel anywhere.
>> I want to be able to speak with foreigners when I travel anywhere.
you know, if you can talk English very well, you can talk to almost of people in the world.
>> There\'s a saying that if you are fluent in English, then you can almost talk to anyone in the world.
so after the covid 19 is resolved, I want to talk foreigner confidently when I go travel.
>> So after COVID-19 is resolved, I want to speak with foreigners confidently when I travel.
that\'s why I study english.
>> That\'s why I study English.
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