How do you practice long patience?

2023-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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In my case, I try to make a goal. It\'s hard to have patience without goals. Every day I make a to-do list. These are my small goals every day to grow my patience. It makes me help to manage my time and energy well. When I did them, I felt achieved. However, the process isn\'t easy. achievement is followed by struggle and stress. I can say that I\'m a person who doesn\'t have much patience. Especially, when I don\'t like to work on something, I feel frustrated and exhausted. Hence, I\'ve given up many goals in the past. When I couldn\'t approach my goals, I was very disappointed. I lost my confidence a lot. After failing, I tried to check and analyze the details of my goals. I just wanted to know what is the problem with couldn\'t approaching my goals. If I don\'t know myself well, it\'s hard to discover what is available potential to approach the goal. So, I tried to check my time and energy that can do my small goals in my life. It is more important to set achievable goals than many goals. :)

강사 첨삭

Precisely, Jane! Our goals should be feasible for us to be successful. it is not about the quantity that matters, but it is the quality.-Faith-
In my case, I try to make a goal. 
>> CORRECT
It\'s hard to have patience without goals. 
>> CORRECT
Every day I make a to-do list. 
>> Every day, I make a to-do list.
These are my small goals every day to grow my patience. 
>> CORRECT
It makes me help to manage my time and energy well. 
>> It helps me manage my time and energy well. 
When I did them, I felt achieved. 
>> CORRECT
However, the process isn\'t easy. 
>> CORRECT
achievement is followed by struggle and stress. 
>> Achievement is followed by struggle and stress. 
I can say that I\'m a person who doesn\'t have much patience. 
>> CORRECT
OR Unfortunately, I know myself that I can be impatient. 
Especially, when I don\'t like to work on something, I feel frustrated and exhausted. 
>> CORRECT
Hence, I\'ve given up many goals in the past. 
>> CORRECT
OR Hence, I have given up many goals in the past. 
When I couldn\'t approach my goals, I was very disappointed. 
>> CORRECT
I lost my confidence a lot. 
>> CORRECT
After failing, I tried to check and analyze the details of my goals. 
>> CORRECT
I just wanted to know what is the problem with couldn\'t approaching my goals. 
>> I just wanted to know the problem why I could not approach my goals. 
If I don\'t know myself well, it\'s hard to discover what is available potential to approach the goal. 
>> If I did not know myself well, it would be hard to discover what the available potential is to approach my goal. 
So, I tried to check my time and energy that can do my small goals in my life. 
>> Therefore, I tried to check my time and energy that can help me do my small goals in life. 
It is more important to set achievable goals than many goals. :)
>> It is more important to set achievable goals than setting many goals. :)

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