How do you prepare for an important examination?
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In the whole life, so many important examinations for me. Among them especially nursing license was very important. When I was grade 4 in the university, I was prepared graduation test. By studying graduation test, very helpful for nursing license exam. After I was passed graduation exam, the prepare of the nursing license was begun in earnest immediately. But I was studying in the home, my concentration was not good compared to study in the campus. So, I decided to study at the study room. After my concentration was improved a little bit. and then, when I prepare for important examination, I go to the study room or library. These places can concentrate for me.
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In the whole life, so many important examinations for me.
>>> In my whole life, there has been so many important examinations for me.
Among them especially nursing license was very important.
>>> Among them, the nursing license exam was especially very important.
When I was grade 4 in the university, I was prepared graduation test.
>>> When I was in the forth year of university, I was preparing for my graduation test.
By studying graduation test, very helpful for nursing license exam.
>>> Studying for the graduation test was very helpful for the nursing license exam.
After I was passed graduation exam, the prepare of the nursing license was begun in earnest immediately.
>>> After I was passed graduation exam, the preparation for the nursing license earnestly began immediately.
But I was studying in the home, my concentration was not good compared to study in the campus.
>>> But I was studying at home, my concentration was not good compared to study in the campus.
So, I decided to study at the study room.
>>> correct
After my concentration was improved a little bit. and then, when I prepare for important examination, I go to the study room or library.
>>> After that, my concentration was improved a little bit. And whenever I prepare for an important examination, I go to the study room or library.
These places can concentrate for me.
>>> These places can help concentration for me.
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