How do you protect your privacy with your phone and social media accounts?

2021-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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Honestly, I do not consider protecting my privacy important. So I don\'t have many things to say. I normally try to avoid setting up the risky applications in the phone. Also I set the phone to be open with only face ID, so no one can look in the phone without my consent. For social media accounts, I usually do not to post essay or pictures, which can indirectly protect my privacy.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again [이름]!

If you have nothing much too hide, there is no fear of being exposed or crossing the line between your privacy and information about you already known by many. Your face I.D. is a very good protection from others from invading your photos and other information you may be keeping private on your phone.

Nonetheless, e-mail or even bank accounts as well as other sensitive aspects of your daily life that needs tight security have their own ways to validate if you are the rightful owner of that account.

Thank you for this concise yet meaningful answer!

-T. Donna =)

Honestly, I do not consider protecting my privacy important. 
>> Correct!

So I don\'t have many things to say.
>> Correct! 

I normally try to avoid setting up the risky applications in the phone. 
>> Correct!

Also I set the phone to be open with only face ID, so no one can look in the phone without my consent. 
>> Also, I set the phone to be opened only with my face ID, so no one can look into the phone without my consent. 

For social media accounts, I usually do not to post essay or pictures, which can indirectly protect my privacy.
>> For social media accounts, I usually do not to post essay or pictures, which can indirectly violate my privacy.

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