How do you raise a child?

2014-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Naomi

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, teacher Naomi. In Korea, It's rain these days, so I'm depressed because I can't run. I hope it will be sunny day tomorrow. Homework tile : How do you raise a child? I think It's parents' very important job is to discover child's talent. To discover his talent, parents should let him experience in various fields as like art, entertainment, science, politics I want my doughter will become an anchor for a TV station. I think she has the ability to acommodate herself to circumstances and speak well.

강사 첨삭

Good day Bruce!

I hope you didn\'t got wet by the rain.

 

Wow! what a stunning answer and dream for you child.^^

 

I want to hear from you more.

Thank you.

See you later.

-T.Naomi^^

 

Good morning, teacher Naomi.
>>correct

In Korea, It\'s rain these days, so I\'m depressed because I can\'t run.
>>In Korea, It\'s raining these days, so I\'m depressed because I can\'t run.
I hope it will be sunny day tomorrow.
>>I hope it will be sunny tomorrow.
Homework tile : How do you raise a child?
>>correct
I think It\'s parents\' very important job is to discover child\'s talent.
>>I think It\'s parents very important job is to discover child\'s talent.

>>OR: The most important job for parents is to discover their child\'s talent.
To discover his talent, parents should let him experience in various fields as like art, entertainment, science, politics
>>To discover their child\'s talent, parents should let them experience various fields such as art, entertainment, science, and politics.
I want my doughter will become an anchor for a TV station.
>>I want my daughter to become an anchor for a TV station.
I think she has the ability to acommodate herself to circumstances and speak well.

>>I think she has the ability to accommodate herself to circumstances and speak well.

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