How do you react when you encounter a homeless person?

2020-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

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Unfortunately, Maybe I will react nothing. Because I\'ve never put in the situation, I can\'t imagine what will l do. And recently Having a talk with a stranger is dangerous because I do not know who is he or she. So I think doing nothing is better than doing something. I will be interviewed tomorrow for exchange student program. Please revise my script.:) Question: If you have to postpone your schedule, what would you say to the person in charge? Dear coordinator (or International officer?) hello, My name is son. I am happy to study at your college. Unfortunately, I won\'t be able to meet the deadline because of the problem regarding visa. So, I\'m wondering if you could postpone the schedule. /Could you please tell me if I can postpone the schedule? I\'d appreciate it if you permit it. I look forward to study at your college. THANK YOU.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Thanks for your answer. I\'m sorry I wasn\'t able to revise your script yesterday since my shift ends at 15:00.

If you still have time, you can check some revisions I\'ve made. You have to wake up early today. Don\'t be late. ^^

Good luck, [이름]! Fighting! ^^

~T.Avery

Unfortunately, Maybe I will react nothing. Because I\'ve never put in the situation, I can\'t imagine what will l do.

>> Unfortunately, maybe I will not react at all because I\'ve never been put in that situation,  so I can\'t imagine what I will do.
And recently Having a talk with a stranger is dangerous because I do not know who is he or she.

>> Also, recently having a talk with a stranger is dangerous because I do not know who he or she is.
So I think doing nothing is better than doing something.

>> CORRECT
I will be interviewed tomorrow for exchange student program. Please revise my script.:)

>> CORRECT
Question: If you have to postpone your schedule, what would you say to the person in charge?
Dear coordinator (or International officer?)

>> Dear coordinator,

OR>> Dear [Name]./Ms. (Last name of the person):
hello, My name is son. I am happy to study at your college.

>> Hello! My name is [Name]. I am happy to study at your college.

OR>> I am honored with the opportunity to study at your college.
Unfortunately, I won\'t be able to meet the deadline because of the problem regarding visa.

>> Unfortunately, I won\'t be able to meet the deadline because of the problem regarding my visa.
So, I\'m wondering if you could postpone the schedule. /

>> Therefore, I\'m wondering if you could postpone the schedule.

Could you please tell me if I can postpone the schedule?

>> Please inform me whether I can cancel it for now.
I\'d appreciate it if you permit it.

>> CORRECT

OR>> (You can also include: Thank you very much for your understanding regarding this matter.)

I look forward to study at your college.

>> CORRECT
THANK YOU.

>> CORRECT

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