How do you react when you encounter a homeless person?

2020-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

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It depends on where I am. If I traveled out of Korea and I met a homeless person , I would feel scared so I would not try to talk with him/her and avoid one\'s eyes. But I don\'t care who I meet in Korea. Sometimes, I want to give some money to a homeless person or just go on my way without any reaction. Because I can see a lot of homeless people near the train station, especially Seoul train station. Many people don\'t understand why homeless people stay there. People think that they can get a job even though they get a small salary. So, they can rent a small house and have a meal. However, people don\'t know what kind of events they had before. They might have been suffering from the events that nobody expects and thinks. I always meet someone who pretends to beggar by asking money lied on the streets. But he is not a homeless person and is not such like a poor person. One of my colleagues saw that a beggar just woke up and then took his luxury car. I couldn\'t believe what my colleague

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! Thanks for your answer. There are more correct sentences than the errors so that means you\'re doing a great job!

I\'ll ask you about this topic again in class. See you in a few minutes! ^^

~T.Avery

It depends on where I am.

>> CORRECT

If I traveled out of Korea and I met a homeless person , I would feel scared so I would not try to talk with him/her and avoid one\'s eyes.

>> CORRECT

But I don\'t care who I meet in Korea.

>> CORRECT

OR>> I don\'t mind meeting beggars in Korea.

Sometimes, I want to give some money to a homeless person or just go on my way without any reaction. Because I can see a lot of homeless people near the train station, especially Seoul train station.

>> Sometimes, I want to give some money to a homeless person or just go on my way without any reaction, because I can see a lot of homeless people near the Seoul train station.
Many people don\'t understand why homeless people stay there.

>> CORRECT

People think that they can get a job even though they get a small salary. So, they can rent a small house and have a meal.

>> People think that they can get a job even though they get a small salary just so they can rent a small house and have a meal.

However, people don\'t know what kind of events they had before.

>> CORRECT

OR>> However, people have no idea what circumstances they\'ve been through.

They might have been suffering from the events that nobody expects and thinks.

>> CORRECT

I always meet someone who pretends to beggar by asking money lied on the streets. But he is not a homeless person and is not such like a poor person.

>> I always meet someone who pretends to be a beggar by asking money and lying on the streets, but he is not a homeless person and doesn\'t look like a poor man.

One of my colleagues saw that a beggar just woke up and then took his luxury car.

>> CORRECT

I couldn\'t believe what my colleague...

>> CORRECT

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